Monday, August 29, 2011

internet saftey

There was this girl named Jenna. Jenna was not popular in school. Jenna had a friend online and said he was 17. Why doels Jenna trust him? I dont know , thats why im asking you. Jenna thinks she loves him. He wants to meet her, she wants to meet him, so they meet. It turns out the guys name is chip, has plaid overals, 80s style reading glasses, is 45, and smells like an old ladie. This guy abducts her and well you know what happens from there. Poor Jenna :( . THIS HAS BEEN A MESSAGE FROM THE,"SAVE THE INTERNETS KIDS FOUNDATION.   

please stay safe on the internet kids.

This story was inspired by the internet safety stories on : http://www.netsmartz.org/

4 comments:

  1. Dear, Wesley this is a good story, but next time you need to proof read your story and spell check it. Also some words are missing. Instead of saying well you know what happens next, tell us what happened or is going to happen next.

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  2. Wesley, I think you could've extended the story to make it more interesting.

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  3. Your story was interesting but you should add a little more next time. And you did very well but next time make sure you check your spelling. But you did well though.

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  4. Your story was great but next time you make another story and post it proof read it.

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